Staring up into an arid sky
I saw the clouds begin to cry
They wept and filled the land
new growth began to cover sand
Another sight I got to see
O what a lady, she
She danced between the stars
Her beauty dazzled from afar
and then she dove straight down
and set herself upon the ground
I had to know this goddess sweet
I had to find the place where we would meet
So out I’ll set and go that way
my journey starts this very day
Note: This is a parallel to “The beginning of a dream“
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very cheerful dream,
beautiful and uplifting…
thank you for the contribution!
how very nice!!! i can read it over and over… so wonderful!!!
this is so adorable. beautiful. just loved reading it.
This is a beautiful poem. You really captured the dreamlike state! I love the flow of this poem as well.
I think the word “began” in line two should be “begin.”
Have a wonderful day!
Thanks, you are right.
beautiful write 😀 loved the starting the most 🙂
Thank you brian
“Staring up into an arid sky
I saw the clouds began to cry”
Tremendous opening lines. Lots of emotion in this poem. Thanks
an emotional one in true sense…
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Thanks, will check it out.
a wonderful journey.. 🙂 well written indeed
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